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The sometimes slight, sometimes heavy, tremors would only last a short time.  Then they would stop, allowing everything to return to normal.
 
The sometimes slight, sometimes heavy, tremors would only last a short time.  Then they would stop, allowing everything to return to normal.
  
One day things changed.  The rumbling began and grew quickly to unprecedented levels.  Soon it became apparent that the entire island was sinking slowly into the ocean around them.  Many of the humans died that day, but not before sacrificing themselves in order to stop the sinking of the island.  The humans who lived through this catastrophe moved into the trees where they gradually died out, maybe because they were unequipped for such an environment, but I am not sure.
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One day things changed.  The rumbling began and grew quickly to unprecedented levels.  Soon it became apparent that the entire island was sinking slowly into the ocean around them.  Many of the humans died that day, but not before sacrificing themselves in order to stop the sinking of the island.  The humans wh lived through this catastrophe moved into the trees where they gradually died out, maybe because they were unequipped for such an environment, but I am not sure.
  
 
This is the story the old man communicated to me, although many details are very unclear in my mind.  I am especially confused as to how the humans saved the island from completely sinking.  In fact I doubt the accuracy of that part of the story; the island must have stopped on its own.  Yet, the old man believes in the truth of this story as if he had been there.  And the tree-dwellers worship him, and aparently all humans, as if <strike>he</strike> they were heroes or gods.
 
This is the story the old man communicated to me, although many details are very unclear in my mind.  I am especially confused as to how the humans saved the island from completely sinking.  In fact I doubt the accuracy of that part of the story; the island must have stopped on its own.  Yet, the old man believes in the truth of this story as if he had been there.  And the tree-dwellers worship him, and aparently all humans, as if <strike>he</strike> they were heroes or gods.

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