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-- Rime, I have named it.  A desolate age with a beauty that is quite different than I had expected or imagined.  The intricate feathers of ice that fall from the sky are awe-inspiring.  I feel as though I could sit and watch them for hours.  And though it is cold here, like I have never experienced before, I find myself enjoying the change of temperature, for it is unlike any other place that I have ever seen.
 
-- Rime, I have named it.  A desolate age with a beauty that is quite different than I had expected or imagined.  The intricate feathers of ice that fall from the sky are awe-inspiring.  I feel as though I could sit and watch them for hours.  And though it is cold here, like I have never experienced before, I find myself enjoying the change of temperature, for it is unlike any other place that I have ever seen.
  
Perhaps the oddest thing is the silence.  Although the wind blows on occasion - when it ceases, there is a suffocating silence that falls on this place, broken only by the distant cries of unseen creatures.
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Perhaps the oddest thing is the silence.  Although the wind blows on occasion - when it ceases, there is a suffcating silence that falls on this place, broken only by the distant cries of unseen creatures.
  
 
-- I visited three times and am sure now that this age will provide the environment I need.  I believe the cold temperature is necessary for obtaining the correct resonance.  Examining the structure of the Books is ever more perplexing, but I am driven onward by my need to understand.  The great tree of possibilities can never fully be grasped, but I must at least try to find one particular branch.
 
-- I visited three times and am sure now that this age will provide the environment I need.  I believe the cold temperature is necessary for obtaining the correct resonance.  Examining the structure of the Books is ever more perplexing, but I am driven onward by my need to understand.  The great tree of possibilities can never fully be grasped, but I must at least try to find one particular branch.

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