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==Preview==
==Preview==
On August 21st, the following description appeared on the Coming Soon section of the [[Myst Online]] website:
On August 21st, the following description appeared on the Coming Soon section of the [[Myst Online]] website:


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:Be sure to join in now as this episode serves as a lead-in to the Myst Online: Uru Live Season Finale.
:Be sure to join in now as this episode serves as a lead-in to the Myst Online: Uru Live Season Finale.


== Events ==
 
{{event|[[Myst Online episodes]]|2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[Deception]]|ends=2007-09-12|hidedescription=1}}
==Story==
=== September 8 ===
===September 8===
* [[J.D. Barnes]], while in [[The Great Tree (explorer organization)|The Great Tree]]'s [[neighborhood]], says "there are some important leads to follow up on" in [[Dr. Watson]]'s journal.
* [[J.D. Barnes]], while in [[The Great Tree (explorer organization)|The Great Tree]]'s [[Bevin]], says "there are some important leads to follow up on" in [[Dr. Watson]]'s journal.
* {{event||2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[Phil Henderson]] visits several [[neighborhood]]s saying "He is coming" and "we need colors."}}
* [[Phil Henderson]] visits several [[neighborhood|neighborhoods]] saying "He is coming" and "we need colors."
* {{event||2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[Cate Alexander]] addresses [[explorers]] in [[Kirel]].}}
* [[Cate Alexander]] addresses [[explorers]] in [[Kirel]].
** She says she doesn't know what Phil is up to.
** She says she doesn't know what Phil is up to.
** She's upset that the Guild Pubs are not available yet.
** She's upset that the Guild Pubs are not available yet.
* {{event||2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[Reteltee]] talks to explorers about the plan to restore the [[Guild]]s.}}
* [[Reteltee]] talks to explorers.
** He reiterates what he was told by [[Marie Sutherland]], that access to the [[Guild Pub]]s is dependent on which shirt one chooses in [[Kirel]] to show support for a particular [[Guild]].
** He reiterates what he was told by [[Marie Sutherland]], that access to the [[Guild Pub]]s is dependent on which shirt one chooses in [[Kirel]] to show support for a particular [[Guild]].
** Other Guilds that are not represented yet does not mean they won't be in the future.
** Other Guilds that are not represented yet does not mean they won't be in the future.
** He tells a story about a Guildsman in the [[Guild of Surveyors]] who is sent to survey a new [[Age]] alone. When the Guildsman returns, he cannot answer questions about the Age unrelated to surveying, and is admonished for attempting to explore the Age alone, without the help of trained members of other Guilds.
** He tells a story about a [[Guildsman]] in the [[Guild of Surveyors]] who is sent to survey a new [[Age]] alone. When the Guildsman returns, he cannot answer questions about the Age unrelated to surveying, and is admonished him for attempting to explore the Age alone, without the help of trained members of other Guilds.
** [[Explorer]] DocOlanA brings up that the explorers are full of people who do the sort of work in the restoration professionally and could help the restorations. Reteltee says that the [[DRC]] seem to be hesitant to give up any control, especially since they take the most vocal negative members of the community to be indicative of the whole.
** [[DocOlanA]] brings up that the explorers are full of people who do the sort of work in the restoration professionally and could help the restorations. Reteltee says that the [[DRC]] seem to be hesitant to give up any control, especially since they take the most vocal negative members of the community to be indicative of the whole.
* {{event||2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[Reteltee]] returns later and begins speaking cryptically and disturbed by something.}}
* [[Reteltee]] returns later and begins speaking cryptically and disturbed by something.
** He refers to being "Watched".
** He refers to being "Watched".
** He says that the [[Cavern]] does not belong to us, or to the [[bahro]], and that "deception begins within".
** He says that the [[Cavern]] does not belong to us, or to the [[Bahro]], and that 'deception begins within'.
** He says we have taken what is not ours, but that if we leave, we take it with us.
** He says we have taken what is not ours, but that if we leave, we take it with us.
** He hopes that [[Dr. Watson]] comes, as he hopes he can "restore sanity".
** He hopes that [[Dr. Watson]] comes, as he hopes he can 'restore sanity'.
** He says the [[Guilds]] may save us, or break us.
** He says the [[Guilds]] may save us, or break us.
* {{event||2007-09-08|9663|4|25|[[J.D. Barnes]] leads a discussion in the [[Watcher's Pub]].}}
* [[J.D. Barnes]] leads a discussion in the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]].
** He suggests that since [[Michael Engberg]] went to [[Descent]] to find [[Dr. Watson]], that important clues might be in Dr. Watson's journal.
** He suggests that since [[Michael Engberg]] went to [[Descent]] to find [[Dr. Watson]], that important clues might be in Dr. Watson's journal.
** He also theorizes that [[reteltee]]'s change in his second speech of the day was intentional, and that it was meant to attract attention and drop hints about something larger which reteltee cannot talk about.
** He also theorizes that [[Reteltee]]'s change in his second speech of the day was intentional, and that it was meant to attract attention and drop hints about something larger which Reteltee cannot talk about.
** He points out that Dr. Watson's journal has a lot of holes, including one where he was planning to talk to [[Dr. Kodama]] about something unspecified.
** He points out that Dr. Watson's journal has a lot of holes, including one where he was planning to talk to [[Dr. Kodama]] about something unspecified.
** He suggests that [[explorers]] comb over journals and ask the [[DRC]] questions to see what they could find out.
** He suggests that [[explorers]] comb over journals and ask the [[DRC]] questions to see what they could find out.


===September 9===
===September 9===
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|Early in the morning, [[Douglas Sharper]] links into the [[Watcher's Pub]].}}
* Early in the morning, [[Douglas Sharper]] links into the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]].
** He says he was told that [[Cate Alexander]] was in a bad mood and he's looking for her.
** He says he was told that [[Cate Alexander]] was in a bad mood and he's looking for her.
** He's worried that the war is coming to us sooner than we think and that we are over our heads.
** He's worried that the war is coming to us sooner than we think and that we are over our heads.
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Reteltee]] visits the [[Watcher's Pub]] after Sharper leaves.}}
* [[Reteltee]] comes in after Sharper leaves.
** He says he only speaks in riddles when he's not allowed to be forthright.
** He says he only speaks in riddles when he's not allowed to be forthright.
** He thinks we need to be building communities.
** He thinks we need to be building communities.
** He feels [[Dr. Watson]] has the key to the puzzle, and that we'll need his guidance to make amends with the [[Bahro|Least]]. He thinks [[Yeesha]] will not do it.
** He feels [[Dr. Watson]] has the key to the puzzle, and that we'll need his guidance to make amends with the [[Least]]. He thinks [[Yeesha]] will not do it.
** He says that Watson knows the answer, that Yeesha does as well, and that [[Atrus]] knew, but was too afraid to act on it.
** He says that Watson knows the answer, that Yeesha does as well, and that [[Atrus]] knew, but was too afraid to act on it.
** He mentions "The Watchers may already feel I've said too much".
** He mentions "The Watchers may already feel I've said too much".
* [[Cate Alexander]] announces that [[Guild pub]]s will be available in the hour.
* [[Cate Alexander]] announces that [[Guild Pub]]s will be available in the hour.
** She declines to comment on problems with the Guild Pubs that might have delayed them.
** She declines to comment on problems with the Guild Pubs that might have delayed them.
** [[Ahnonay]] is still "many days away".
** [[Ahnonay]] is still 'many days away'.
** She suggests you support the [[Guild]] closest to your interests.
** She suggests you support the [[Guild]] closest to your interests.
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Guild pub]]s become available in the [[Nexus]].}}
* [[Guild Pub]]s become available in the [[Nexus]].
** The Nexus shows a link to a Guild pub based on the shirt you have selected in [[Kirel]].
** The Nexus shows a link to a Guild Pub based off of the shirt you have selected in [[Kirel]].
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Reteltee]] makes another appearance, this time in Kirel, discussing his recent actions and the Guild pubs.}}
* [[Reteltee]] makes another appearance, this time in Kirel, discussing his recent actions and the guild pubs.
** He says that he is not going to be an official supporter of any one particular guild, but will change shirts depending on which Pub he wants to go to.
** He says that he is not going to be an official supporter of any one particular guild, but will change shirts depending on which Pub he wants to go to.
** He says that the [[DRC]] will neither confirm nor deny that they are taking actions that could endanger the cavern, and that he's unable to comment about whether the rush to release ages by Cate has to do with an upcoming bahro war. He also says that he thinks that the DRC knows more about [[Esher]]'s experiments with the bahro than they're telling explorers.
** He says that the DRC will neither confirm nor deny that they are taking actions that could endanger the cavern, and that he's unable to comment about whether the rush to release ages by Cate has to do with an upcoming Bahro war. He also says that he thinks that the DRC knows more about [[Esher]]'s experiments with the Bahro than they're telling explorers.
** He assures explorers that his alliance lies with them, not the DRC. He says that the DRC is not the same one that Watson founded. He says that he trusts [[Yeesha]] and [[Phil Henderson]] more than the DRC.
** He assures explorers that his alliance lies with them, not the DRC. He says that the DRC is not the same one that Watson founded. He says that he trusts Yeesha and [[Phil Henderson]] more than the DRC.
** He confirms that he's had an encounter with a bahro at his [[Relto]], but says that there is an OOC reason that he cannot comment on it.
** He confirms that he's had an encounter with a Bahro at his [[Relto]], but says that there is an OOC reason that he cannot comment on it.
** He says that, if there is a war, he is going to stay in the cavern for it, even if it means that he dies.
** He says that, if there is a war, he is going to stay in the cavern for it, even if it means that he dies.
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Douglas Sharper]] addresses explorers in the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]].}}
* [[Douglas Sharper]] addresses explorers in the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]].
** He says that the war is worse than we think and that the Cavern might not be around for much longer.
** He says that the war is worse than we think and that the Cavern might not be around for much longer.
** [[J.D. Barnes]] tries to get him to reveal more, but he says he'll let "him" explain it, and that we can only try to be prepared.
** [[J.D. Barnes]] tries to get him to reveal more, but he says he'll let "him" explain it, and that we can only try to be prepared.
** He mentions he is going to open the [[Spy Room]] again.
** He mentions he is going to open the [[Spy Room]] again.
* {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Reteltee]] meets with several explorers ([[J.D. Barnes]], [[Marten]], [[JWPlatt]] and [[Tai'lahr]]) privately to discuss the [[DRC]], the [[bahro]], and the Guilds.}}
* [[Reteltee]] meets with several explorers ([[J.D. Barnes]], [[Marten]], [[JWPlatt]] and [[Tai'lahr]]) privately.
** He feels the [[DRC]] has been using the [[Guild]] issue to divide explorers, which he things is dangerous. He feels whatever is coming will require the explorers to be unified, or there will be a second "Fall".
** He feels the [[DRC]] has been using the [[Guild]] issue to divide explorers, which he things is dangerous. He feels whatever is coming will require the explorers to be unified, or there will be a second "Fall".
** [[Cate Alexander]] no longer talks to reteltee. He says only [[Marie Sutherland]] talks to him, but makes a point to emphasize that he is "their" Guild Advisor.
** [[Cate Alexander]] no longer talks to Reteltee. He says only [[Marie Sutherland]] talks to him, but makes a point to emphasize that he is ''their'' Guild Advisor.
** Marten suggests that if Dr. Watson returns, he can bring the DRC under control. But reteltee says he think Watson will not want to be a part of the new DRC.
** Marten suggests that if Dr. Watson returns, he can bring the DRC under control. But Reteltee says he think Watson will not want to be a part of the new DRC.
** Reteltee says he cannot say more, but he has left hints for people to figure out. He's confident that the explorers can figure it out before the DRC does.
** Reteltee says he cannot say more, but he has left hints for people to figure out. He's confident that the explorers can figure it out before the DRC does.
** He says he cannot talk about a number of things, including his communication with a [[bahro]] in his [[Relto]] because he "knows how not to get himself killed".
** He says he cannot talk about a number of things, including his communication with a [[Bahro]] in his [[Relto]] because he 'knows how not to get himself killed'.
** After Reteltee leaves, J.D. Barnes states he think that reteltee is trying to pass on a message about [[Douglas Sharper]], given how often he uses the word "sharper" when dropping hints. He also says he thinks reteltee is trying to point explorers to the [[Words]] of the [[Watcher]] in the same way.
** After Reteltee leaves, J.D. Barnes states he think that Reteltee is trying to pass on a message about [[Douglas Sharper]], given how often he uses the word 'sharper' when dropping hints. He also says he thinks Reteltee is trying to point explorers to the [[Words]] of the [[Watcher]] in the same way.
** He suggests that a recording of the conversation be given to other explorers in order to see what else Reteltee might be hinting at.
** He suggests that a recording of the conversation be given to other explorers in order to see what else Reteltee might be hinting at.


===September 10===
===September 10===
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Phil Henderson]] walks along the [[Tokotah Rooftop]] and tells explorers that "he" is here and we have to listen.}}
* [[Phil Henderson]] walks along the [[Tokotah Rooftop|roof of Tokotah]] and tells explorers that "he" is here and we have to listen.
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Explorers]] find the [[sparkle]] has moved to [[Teledahn]]}}, and that there is a [[bahro stone]] to the [[spy room]] there.  
* [[Explorers]] find the [[sparkle]] has moved to [[Teledahn]], and that there is a [[Bahro stone]] to the [[Spy Room]] there.  
** In the spy room is a [[Linking Book]] to [[Phil's Relto]]. {{event||2007-09-09|9663|4|26|[[Phil's Relto]] is made available to [[explorer]]s.|hidedescription=1}}
** In the Spy Room is a [[linking book]] to [[Phil's Relto]].
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Marie Sutherland]] announces that the stained glass contest winners for [[Eder Delin]] and [[Eder Tsogal]] will be put into [[neighborhood]]s today.}}
* [[Marie Sutherland]] announces that the stained glass projects for [[Eder Delin]] and [[Eder Tsogal]] will be put into [[neighborhoods]] today.
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Marie Sutherland]] goes to various [[neighborhood]]s and replaces the [[Eder Tsogal]] book for [[Eder Delin]].}}
* [[Marie Sutherland]] goes to various [[neighborhoods]] and replaces the [[Eder Tsogal]] book for [[Eder Delin]].
** {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|Winter arrives in [[Eder Delin]].|hidedescription=1}}It is winter in Eder Delin.
** It is winter in Eder Delin.
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Michael Engberg]] links into [[Ae'gura]].}}
* [[Michael Engberg]] links into [[Ae'gura]].
** He says he has been alone and doesn't want to talk about it.
** He says he has been alone and doesn't want to talk about it.
** [[Marie Sutherland]] greets him and they link out to a private [[neighborhood]].
** [[Marie Sutherland]] greets him and they link out to a private [[neighborhood]].
* {{event||2007-09-10|9663|4|26|[[Victor Laxman]] gives a pep talk to explorers about [[pellet]] production.}}
* [[Victor Laxman]] gives a pep talk to explorers about [[pellet]] production.
** He says pellet production has fallen off and they need 'consistent' production to light the [[lake]].
** He says pellet production has fallen off and they need 'consistent' production to light the [[lake]].
** [[JWPlatt]] points out that without consistent feedback about how they have an effect, [[explorers]] are not likely to continue making pellets.
** [[JWPlatt]] points out that without consistent feedback about how they have an effect, [[explorers]] are not likely to continue making pellets.


===September 11===
===September 11===
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|Very early in the morning, [[Dr. Watson]] returns to the [[Cavern]].}}
* Very early in the morning, [[Dr. Watson]] returns to the [[Cavern]].
** [[Michael Engberg]] came to find him.
** [[Michael Engberg]] came to find him.
** He has been with [[Phil Henderson]] for many years. He's also been in contact with [[Yeesha]].  
** He has been with [[Phil Henderson]] for many years. He's also been in contact with [[Yeesha]].  
** He has been to [[Releeshahn]] and says that [[Atrus]] is still there.
** He has been to [[Releeshahn]] and says that [[Atrus]] is still there.
** The [[bahro]] conflict spans many ages, but earth is safe for the time being.
** The [[Bahro]] conflict spans many ages, but earth is safe for the time being.
** How effective communication with the [[bahro]] is varies by individual bahro. Some seem to understand some of our words, others do not. They respond to emotion very well.
** How effective communication with the [[Bahro]] is varies by individual Bahro. Some seem to understand some of our words, others do not. They respond to emotion very well.
** The [[bahro]] have lived in [[Noloben]] for a long time, though he doesn't know if it is their [[Age]] of origin. It's one of the Ages with the heaviest fighting.
** The [[Bahro]] have lived in [[Noloben]] for a long time, though he doesn't know if it is their [[Age]] of origin. It's one of the Ages with the heaviest fighting.
** The [[bahro]] have recently been given their freedom to choose their own destinies. Some are choosing revenge and destruction.
** The [[Bahro]] have recently been given their freedom to choose their own destinies. Some are choosing revenge and destruction.
** He has a great deal to think about in regards to the [[DRC]].
** He has a great deal to think about in regards to the [[DRC]].
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|[[Douglas Sharper]] tells explorers in the [[Watcher's Pub]] to listen to [[Dr. Watson]], and that the [[bahro]] are busy fighting each other to the death.}}
* [[Douglas Sharper]] tells explorers in the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]] to listen to [[Dr. Watson]], and that the [[Bahro]] are busy fighting each other to the death.
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|[[Cate Alexander]] announces that [[Dr. Watson]] has chosen not to rejoin the [[DRC]].}}
* [[Cate Alexander]] announces that [[Dr. Watson]] has chosen not to rejoin the [[DRC]].
** She says they are unsure about [[Michael Engberg]] and mentions [[Douglas Sharper]] is 'leaving'.
** She says they are unsure about [[Michael Engberg]] and mentions [[Douglas Sharper]] is 'leaving'.
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|The [[DRC]] sends out a [[KI]] message with a [http://www.drcsite.org/images/pellets.jpg graph] of [[pellet]] production.}}
* The [[DRC]] sends out a [[KI]] message with a [http://www.drcsite.org/images/pellets.jpg graph] of [[pellet]] production.
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|[[Phil Henderson]] meets with explorers in [[Phil's Relto|his Relto]].}}
* [[Phil Henderson]] meets with explorers in [[Phil's Relto|his Relto]].
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|[[Dr. Watson]] meets with explorers in the [[Watcher's Pub]].}}
* [[Dr. Watson]] meets with explorers in the [[Watcher's Sanctuary]].
** He reveals that he is the one who gave the [[Tablet]] to the [[bahro]], thus making him the protagonist of [[Myst V]].
** He reveals that he is the one who gave the [[Tablet]] to the [[Bahro]], thus making him the protagonist of [[Myst V]].
** He does not know who created the Tablet, and neither does [[Yeesha]].
** He does not know who created the Tablet, and neither does [[Yeesha]].
** He says that he feels like we should stop restorations. He reiterates Yeesha, "Find a way, make a home."
** He says that he feels like we should stop restorations. He reiterates Yeesha, "Find a way, make a home."
** Besides this, he answers few questions from explorers directly. He does not talk about his experiences in [[Releeshahn]] nor about what he's talked to with [[Yeesha]] and [[Atrus]].
** Besides this, he answers few questions from explorers directly. He does not talk about his experiences in [[Releeshahn]] nor about what he's talked to with [[Yeesha]] and [[Atrus]].
** Yeesha has no children. This would bring into question the [[Words|Words of The Watcher]].
** Yeesha has no children. This would bring into question [[Yeesha's daughter|the words of The Watcher]].
* [[Phil Henderson]] meets again with explorers in [[Phil's Relto|his Relto]].
* [[Phil Henderson]] meets again with explorers in [[Phil's Relto|his Relto]].
** He says to listen to Dr. Watson and says that the answers are there. Explorers just have to "listen to her."
** He says to listen to Dr. Watson and says that the answers are there. Explorers just have to 'listen to her.'
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|The stained glass winners are placed in [[neighborhood]]s.}}
* The stained glass winners are placed in [[neighborhoods]].
* {{event||2007-09-11|9663|4|27|[[Nick White]] visits explorers and tells a few jokes.}}
* [[Nick White]] visits explorers and tells a few jokes.




===September 12===
===September 12===
* {{event||2007-09-12|9663|4|28|[[Eleri]] organizes a Town Hall and invites [[Dr. Watson]] to appear and answer questions.}}
* [[Eleri]] organizes a [[Town Hall]] and invited [[Dr. Watson]] to appear and answer questions.
** Dr. Watson does not attend. However, [[J.D. Barnes]] does attend, and Eleri asks him to answer questions in Dr. Watson's stead. [http://www.uruobsession.com/forum/index.php?act=ST&f=56&t=31636&st=180]
** Dr. Watson does not attend. However, [[J.D. Barnes]] does attend, and Eleri asks him to answer questions in Dr. Watson's stead. [http://www.uruobsession.com/forum/index.php?act=ST&f=56&t=31636&st=180]
* {{event||2007-09-12|9663|4|28|The [[DRC]] vest clothing item appears in [[Phil's Relto]].}}
* The [[DRC]] vest clothing item appears in [[Phil's Relto]].
* {{event||2007-09-12|9663|4|28|Dr. Watson gives a prepared speech to explorers about the guilds and the bahro.}}
* Dr. Watson gives a prepared speech to explorers.
** He stresses that, for the guilds to work, explorers need to put their pride aside and learn to work together.
** He stresses that, for the Guilds to work, explorers need to put their pride aside and learn to work together.
** He clarifies that he does ''not'' feel that explorers should leave the cavern. He does say, however, that he personally feels that restoration should not continue.
** He clarifies that he does ''not'' feel that explorers should leave the cavern. He does say, however, that he personally feels that restoration should not continue.
** He says that he has come to the conclusion that the [[bahro nekisahl|"bad" bahro]] are simply being destructive because they can, possibly to avenge the deeds that [[Esher]] committed.
** He says that he has come to the conclusion that the "bad" Bahro are simply being destructive because they can, possibly to avenge the deeds that [[Esher]] committed.
** Very importantly, he says that Yeesha has searched hundreds of Ages to try to find something to stop the bahro war, but she could not find it. He says that the guilds need to create new Ages in order to try to find something to help stop the bahro war.
** Very importantly, he says that Yeesha has searched hundreds of ages to try to find something to stop the Bahro war, but she could not find it. He says that the guilds need to create new ages in order to try to find something to help stop the Bahro war.
* {{event||2007-09-12|9663|4|28|The Birds [[Relto page]] appears in the dry [[Cleft]].}}
* The Birds [[Relto page]] appears in the dry [[Cleft]].
 


==Content==
==Content==
* Areas
* Areas
** [[Guild pub|Guild pubs]]
** [[Guild Pub|Guild Pubs]]
** [[Phil's Relto]]
** [[Phil's Relto]]
** [[Spy room]]
** [[Spy Room]]
* Clothing
* Clothing
** DRC vest in [[Phil's Relto]]
** DRC vest in [[Phil's Relto]]
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* Other
* Other
** September [[Sparkle]] in [[Teledahn]].
** September [[Sparkle]] in [[Teledahn]].
** Stained Glass Restorations for [[Eder Delin]] and [[Eder Tsogal]] in [[neighborhood]]s.
** Stained Glass Restorations for [[Eder Delin]] and [[Eder Tsogal]] in [[neighborhoods]].
 
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