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At least, that is the story I was told when I arrived today on the island.  Emmit, Branch, and Will were surprised to see me at first but even before that night ended we were all becoming good friends.
 
At least, that is the story I was told when I arrived today on the island.  Emmit, Branch, and Will were surprised to see me at first but even before that night ended we were all becoming good friends.
  
- - Today the second day on this newly created age a strange thing happened.  It was not strange to me but the three boys did not understand what was happening.  While I was relaxing under a large tree on one of the smaller rock islands, it began to rain.  It was a nice rain that lasted for about an hour in the morning.  I explained to the boys that the rain was not harmful, yet they obviously still feared it.  Before going to seep tonight, I told the boys I would leave the following day.  I told them that while I was gone, I would make a surprising change in their world.  They didn't understand (not that I expected them to.)
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- - Today the second day on this newly created age a strange thing happened.  It was not strange to me but the three boys did not understand what was happening.  While I was relaxing under a large tree on one of the smaller rock islands, it began to rain.  It was a nice rain that lasted for about an hour in the morning.  I explained to the boys that the rain was not harmful, yet they obviously still feared it.  Before going to seep tonight, I told the boys I would leave the following day.  I told them that while I was gone, I would make a surprising change in their world.  They didn't understand (not that I expected them to.)
  
 
- - I still do not fully understand what happened today.
 
- - I still do not fully understand what happened today.
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I returned with many tools that I will need for construction of the lighthouse.  I have decided that once the lighthouse is completed I will leave for some time and let the world's own imagination have control.
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I returned with many tools that I will need for construction of the lighthouse.  I have decided that once the lighthouse is completed I will leave for some time and let the world's own imagination have control.
  
 
- - We have worked three weeks on the lighthouse now, and are making great progress.  The rock that we are building on, seems to not be as secure as I would like.  I have had to alter my plans slightly, but those alterations pose no real problem.
 
- - We have worked three weeks on the lighthouse now, and are making great progress.  The rock that we are building on, seems to not be as secure as I would like.  I have had to alter my plans slightly, but those alterations pose no real problem.
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- - The boys are quite strong and have been helping me immensely.  I estimate construction will be done within two days.  
 
- - The boys are quite strong and have been helping me immensely.  I estimate construction will be done within two days.  
  
- - The lighthouse is finished and we are all proud of our creation.  The boys are amazed a the structure wrought from rock with their own hands.  That evening we powered up the generator - much to the boys' dread at first, and shined a great light to the horizon for many hours.  I stayed the night in the top of the lighthouse and in the morning awoke to observe the sunrise without my being coated with the chilly blanket of ocean dew I had become accustomed to.
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- - The lighthouse is finished and we are all proud of our creation.  The boys are amazed a the structure wrought from rock with their own hands.  That evening we powered up the generator - much to the boys' dread at first, and shined a great light to the horizon for many hours.  I stayed the night in the top of the lighthouse and in the morning awoke to observe the sunrise without my being coated with the chilly blanket of ocean dew I had become accustomed to.
  
 
- - It was Will who first saw the girl.  She was swimming not far from the boat where Will was getting ready to hunt for fish.  Then Will noticed a man not far away from the girl.  Emmit was very pleased to meet the additional neighbors.
 
- - It was Will who first saw the girl.  She was swimming not far from the boat where Will was getting ready to hunt for fish.  Then Will noticed a man not far away from the girl.  Emmit was very pleased to meet the additional neighbors.
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of it this age as a gift to myself that I will wrap up and open someday in the future, only to discover that it has changed so much that indeed it is a surprise.  Besides I have yet another new age that awaits me.  It seems I'm going to need some way to travel underwater in this new age, and so much planning is in order.
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of it this age as a gift to myself that I will wrap up and open someday in the future, only to discover that it has changed so much that indeed it is a surprise.  Besides I have yet another new age that awaits me.  It seems I'm going to need some way to travel underwater in this new age, and so much planning is in order.
  
- - It has been 10 years since I left this age, which I have since called The Stoneship Age.  Upon returning I cannot believe the changes that have taken place.  The original 3 "boys" have grown into adults, and there are many new faces that I do not recognize.  Branch told me that it has not rained for seven years and the cool breezes are back again.
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- - It has been 10 years since I left this age, which I have since called The Stoneship Age.  Upon returning I cannot believe the changes that have taken place.  The original 3 "boys" have grown into adults, and there are many new faces that I do not recognize.  Branch told me that it has not rained for seven years and the cool breezes are back again.
  
 
They are all very content and have been serving me with new foods and showing me new materials they have discovered.  It even seems they have found gold somewhere; I see it in many forms around the island.
 
They are all very content and have been serving me with new foods and showing me new materials they have discovered.  It even seems they have found gold somewhere; I see it in many forms around the island.

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