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| link-ins = Fissure Plateau, Fire Marble Domes
| link-ins = Fissure Plateau, Fire Marble Domes
| author = [[Gehn]]
| author = [[Gehn]]
| connections = *[[Age 233]]
| connections = [[Age 233]], [[Tay]], the [[Cleft]]
*[[Tay]]
*the [[Cleft]] (Earth)
}}
}}
'''Riven''' was the fifth [[Age]] written by [[Gehn]].  All of Gehn's ages were unstable, and though Riven was no exception, it was one of his more successful attempts.  Gehn was imprisoned on Riven by his son [[Atrus]] for 33 years.  During that time, he appointed himself God of the [[Rivenese]] people, and radically altered the landscape with his own buildings and infrastructure.  The people of Riven split into two opposing groups: those who followed Gehn, and the [[Moiety]] who opposed Gehn.
'''Riven''' was the fifth [[Age]] written by [[Gehn]].  All of Gehn's ages were unstable, and though Riven was no exception, it was one of his more successful attempts.  Gehn was imprisoned on Riven by his son [[Atrus]] for 33 years.  During that time, he appointed himself God of the [[Rivenese]] people, and radically altered the landscape with his own buildings and infrastructure.  The people of Riven split into two opposing groups: those who followed Gehn, and the [[Moiety]] who opposed Gehn.
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[[File:Riven_islands_catherine.jpg|thumb|Sketch of four of the five Riven islands from [[Catherine]]'s journal.]]
[[File:Riven_islands_catherine.jpg|thumb|Sketch of four of the five Riven islands from [[Catherine]]'s journal.]]
[[File:Survey_island_schematic.png|thumb|A schematic map of the five islands.  Clockwise from the upper left, Book Assembly Island, Temple Island, Prison Island, Jungle Island, Survey Island.]]
[[File:Survey_island_schematic.png|thumb|A schematic map of the five islands.  Clockwise from the upper left, Book Assembly Island, Temple Island, Prison Island, Jungle Island, Survey Island.]]
'''[[Temple Island]]''' was the site of [[Temple of Gehn|Gehn's Temple]], and contained the original link-in point for Riven.  The most prominent feature on this island however was the [[Golden Superdome]], which generated power for Gehn's faulty [[book|linking books]].  Temple Island was the site of the final battle between [[Atrus]] and [[Gehn]], and was where the [[Star Fissure]] could be found.  The Rivenese villagers called the island ''Allapo'' or "water pool", and to the Moiety called it ''Allatwan'' or "pool of stars")
'''[[Temple Island]]''' was the site of Gehn's Temple, and contained the original link-in point for Riven.  The most prominent feature on this island however was the [[Golden Superdome]], which generated power for Gehn's faulty [[book|linking books]].  Temple Island was the site of the final battle between [[Atrus]] and [[Gehn]], and was where the [[Star Fissure]] could be found.  The Rivenese villagers called the island ''Allapo'' or "water pool", and to the Moiety called it ''Allatwan'' or "pool of stars")


'''[[Jungle Island]]''' was the one island that belonged to the Rivenese population after Gehn claimed the other islands for himself.  The Rivenese village was located around a lake, along with a schoolhouse and a gallows that Gehn used to exert his power over the villagers.  Also on the island was a lush jungle, and a sandy lagoon.
'''[[Jungle Island]]''' was the one island that belonged to the Rivenese population after Gehn claimed the other islands for himself.  The Rivenese village was located around a lake, along with a schoolhouse and a gallows that Gehn used to exert his power over the villagers.  Also on the island was a lush jungle, and a sandy lagoon.
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The [[Wahrk]] was a large fish that held a great importance to the Rivenese.  Before the arrival of Gehn, they respected and feared the Wahrk, as it was the most powerful force they knew.  Gehn took advantage of their reverence for the fish by co-opting its likeness to use as an instrument of terror.
The [[Wahrk]] was a large fish that held a great importance to the Rivenese.  Before the arrival of Gehn, they respected and feared the Wahrk, as it was the most powerful force they knew.  Gehn took advantage of their reverence for the fish by co-opting its likeness to use as an instrument of terror.


The Rivenese subsisted mainly on fish, and meat from [[Sunner]]s, an aquatic mammal that was hunted nearly to extinction.  [[Ytram]]s were poisonous frogs that the Moiety used to make poison darts.  [[Scarab]] beetles could be found in the jungle, and were likely similar to beetles found in other D'ni ages, as they were an ingredient of the [[ink]] used to write [[book]]s.
The Rivenese subsisted mainly on fish, and meat from [[Sunner]]s, an aquatic mammal that were hunted nearly to extinction.  [[Ytram]]s were poisonous frogs that the Moiety used to make poison darts.  [[Scarab]] beetles could be found in the jungle, and were likely similar to beetles found in other D'ni ages, as they were an ingredient of the [[ink]] used to write [[book]]s.


===Water===
===Water===
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[[Gehn]] grew up during the [[fall of D'ni]] and spent his adult life obsessed with the idea of reviving the culture and traditions of his people.  With no [[D'ni (race)|D'ni people]] to teach him, Gehn was left with a twisted idea of what D'ni culture meant.  Gehn's method of Writing involved copying and pasting from other [[book]]s, which resulted in [[Age]]s that were unstable.  He believed that the Ages written in Descriptive Books were Created by the writer, which made the writer God, and that he therefore had the authority to do whatever he wanted with his own Ages and their inhabitants.
[[Gehn]] grew up during the [[fall of D'ni]] and spent his adult life obsessed with the idea of reviving the culture and traditions of his people.  With no [[D'ni (race)|D'ni people]] to teach him, Gehn was left with a twisted idea of what D'ni culture meant.  Gehn's method of Writing involved copying and pasting from other [[book]]s, which resulted in [[Age]]s that were unstable.  He believed that the Ages written in Descriptive Books were Created by the writer, which made the writer God, and that he therefore had the authority to do whatever he wanted with his own Ages and their inhabitants.


Gehn didn't give his Fifth Age a name.  Like all of his ages, he only ever referred to it by number, but its inhabitants called it '''Riven'''.  Riven along with several of Gehn's other ages such as [[Age 37]]{{citation needed}} served as training grounds to teach non-D'ni the [[Art]].  Gehn established a skeleton of the '[[Guild of Writers]]', beginning to teach [[Rivenese]] natives how to write in [[D'ni language|D'ni]] and construct Ages.  The members of this Guild were branded on their necks with Gehn's symbol and elevated above the rest of the Rivenese.  Gehn's most notable student was [[Catherine]], who quickly excelled beyond what Gehn could teach her.  However, he exhibited a callous disregard for the people and culture of Riven.
Gehn didn't give his Fifth Age a name.  Like all of his ages, he only ever referred to it by number, but its inhabitants called it '''Riven'''.  Riven along with several of Gehn's other ages such as [[Age 37]] served as training grounds to teach non-D'ni the [[Art]].  Gehn established a skeleton of the '[[Guild of Writers]]', teaching [[Rivenese]] natives how to write in [[D'ni language|D'ni]], and construct Ages.  His most notable student was [[Catherine]], who quickly excelled beyond what Gehn could teach her.  However, he exhibited a callous disregard for the people and culture of Riven.


===The Battle at the Fissure===
===The Battle at the Fissure===
[[File:Gate room image 1.png|thumb|[[Atrus]] plunges into the [[Star Fissure]], leaving [[Gehn]] trapped on Riven.]]
In order to halt Gehn's destructive path across other Ages, his son [[Atrus]] trapped Gehn on Riven by removing all books from the Age. During the climactic battle, Catherine wrote various changes into Riven's descriptive book to provide Atrus an opportunity to safely escape.  These changes included numerous volcanic fissures, a solar eclipse, and the sudden appearance of [[Riven daggers|five giant daggers]].  The daggers would remain until Riven's final days, and one of them became [[Moiety dagger|the symbol]] of resistance against Gehn.  A consequence of these changes was the [[Star Fissure]] that appeared on what later became [[Temple Island]].  The Star Fissure was a rift between Ages, and likely a manifestation of Riven's instabilities.  When Atrus flung the last linking book into the fissure,  Gehn was at last trapped on Riven.  The Age of Riven was always unstable and doomed to die, but the Star Fissure hastened the Age's inevitable collapse.
In order to halt Gehn's destructive path across other Ages, his son [[Atrus]] trapped Gehn on Riven by removing all books from the Age. During the climactic battle, Catherine wrote various changes into Riven's descriptive book to provide Atrus an opportunity to safely escape.  These changes included numerous volcanic fissures, a solar eclipse, and the sudden appearance of [[Riven daggers|five giant daggers]].  The daggers would remain until Riven's final days, and one of them became [[Moiety dagger|the symbol]] of resistance against Gehn.  A consequence of these changes was the [[Star Fissure]] that appeared on what later became [[Temple Island]].  The Star Fissure was a rift between Ages, and likely a manifestation of Riven's instabilities.  When Atrus flung the last linking book into the fissure,  Gehn was at last trapped on Riven.  The Age of Riven was always unstable and doomed to die, but the Star Fissure hastened the Age's inevitable collapse.


===Gehn's Banishment===
===Gehn's Banishment===
Once trapped on Riven, Gehn took his place as God of the Rivenese people.  He reshaped the Age to his own ends.  Abandoning his earlier plan to teach the Rivenese something of the Art, he established five new guilds: Bookmakers, Builders, Educators, Maintainers, and Surveyors.  Gehn spent many years re-creating the Art, and mobilizing Riven's resources to create [[book]]s and [[ink]].  He ruled the Age by way of terror and brute force, but a group of Rivenese who had witnessed the battle at the Fissure formed a group called the [[Moiety]] to fight back.  Thus, the Rivenese people became divided into those who followed Gehn, and those who resisted.
Once trapped on Riven, Gehn took his place as God of the Rivenese people.  He reshaped the Age to his own ends.  Gehn spent many years re-creating the Art, and mobilizing Riven's resources to create [[book]]s and [[ink]].  He ruled the Age by way of terror and brute force, but a group of Rivenese who had witnessed the battle at the Fissure formed a group called the [[Moiety]] to fight back.  Thus, the Rivenese people became divided into those who followed Gehn, and those who resisted.


===The Collapse of Riven===
===The Collapse of Riven===
Riven was doomed to collapse before Gehn ever set foot on it, because the Descriptive Book contained too many contradictions.  Among the numerous instabilities of Riven were "the structure of the tectonic plates beneath the planet's crust, the type and strength of the oceanic currents, fluctuations in gravitational fields, and the composition of the crust..."<ref>[[Book of Atrus]], chapter 21, paperback edition p. 352–353</ref> Riven's moon had an orbit low enough that great tides would eventually drown the island.  Ultimately the moon would collide with the planet.  Atrus wrote corrections into the Descriptive Book which corrected the most severe flaws temporarily, but his fixes began to fail around the time of Catherine's return to Riven.
Riven was doomed to collapse before Gehn ever set foot on it, because the Descriptive Book contained too many contradictions.  Among the numerous instabilities of Riven were "the structure of the tectonic plates beneath the planet's crust, the type and strength of the oceanic currents, fluctuations in gravitational fields, and the composition of the crust..."<ref>[[Book of Atrus]], chapter 21, paperback edition p. 352–353</ref> Riven's moon had an orbit low enough that great tides would eventually drown the island.  Ultimately the moon would collide with the planet.  Atrus wrote corrections into the Descriptive Book which corrected the most severe flaws temporarily, but his fixes began to fail around the time of Catherine's return to Riven.


The [[Star Fissure]] accelerated the age's collapse.  In its final years, the island split into five separate islands and began drifting further and further apart.  The final demise of Riven came when the Star Fissure was re-opened.  The entire age{{contested|reason=The final fate of Riven is purely speculative}} collapsed into the void between ages.  Just before the collapse, Catherine succeeded in relocating the people of Riven to [[Tay]].
The [[Star Fissure]] accelerated the age's collapse.  In its final years, the island split into five separate islands and began drifting further and further apart.  The final demise of Riven came when the Star Fissure was re-opened.  The entire age collapsed into the void between ages.  Just before the collapse, Catherine succeeded in relocating the people of Riven to [[Tay]].


===Aftermath===
===Aftermath===
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